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7 Ways to Write Super-Effective Google Ads (with Real Examples)

Author: Johnathan Dane
Last Updated: December 18, 2023 | Paid Search Marketing

Writing Google Ads (formerly known as AdWords) ads can be extremely frustrating because you need to fit all your ad copy into such a tiny space.

“Only 25 characters for the headline?!” “I can’t use the word ‘click’? But that’s what I want them to do!” “I can’t fit all my benefits and features here…”

Seriously Google?

You have to get creative to stand out from the nine other advertisers you’re sharing real estate space with (or as few as four competitors if you’re on mobile).

So how do you do it?

I’m here to give you some proven tactics, tips, and ad copy examples you can use to write amazing Google ads that will bring you higher click-through rates, higher Quality Scores and higher conversion rates.

Ready to have some fun while learning how to write Google Ads? Let’s go!

Mirror the visitor’s end goal

Because many of your competitors are using dynamic keyword insertion and bidding on similar keywords, you’ll notice that a lot of their ads say the same thing.

It’s easy to get lost in the mix and hurt your chances of getting that click – so how can you stand out?

Advertisers sometimes lose sight of what their customers are truly looking for. I call this “The End Goal:” what people ultimately want to accomplish with the help of your product or service.

Understanding this can be the secret to writing an ad that stands out from the sea of DKI keywords.

A hypothetical example

Let’s say you sell acne products and your visitors search for keywords like, “Help get rid of acne.” You want to know how to write a Google ad based on that search term.

Your headline shouldn’t ask prospects if they’re “Dealing with Acne?” – as the advertiser, you already know that they are.


Instead, you should speak to their End Goal – what they’re looking to achieve – with a headline like this:

Kill Acne Once & For All

Don’t give up very precious headline space for something you and the visitor already know. Instead, give visitors that end solution they’re looking for.

A real-world example

What if you’re a car buyer who purchases cars from the general public? What should your Google ad copy look like?

Interested prospects might search for something like this:


WeBuyCars.com tells the visitor they’ll buy the car – which mirrors the prospect’s end goal.

To make it easy for people to convert and remove ambiguity, all these ads should focus on telling prospects what they want to hear: “We’ll Buy Your Car Today.”

Why? Because the goal of the searcher is to have someone buy their car. How they go about selling it isn’t as important as actually getting it sold.

With a headline like “Sell Your Car Today,” the searcher might wonder if they have to list their car themselves on an AutoTrader-like platform and field calls from a ton of tire-kickers who aren’t really serious about buying a car. Or even worse, will they get a call back from seven interested companies who will spam them until they die?

I’ve run this test, specifically for a car buyer, pitting “Need To Sell Your Car?” (control) versus “We’ll Buy Your Car Today” (variation).

This simple headline tweak resulted in a 30% increase in conversions.

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Use countdown timers to trigger loss aversion

Did you know that we’re more readily motivated by the idea of losing out than the idea of gaining something?

This commonly known psychological force is called loss aversion and it can be a powerful way of boosting your Google Ads click-through and conversion rates.

Luckily, injecting a little FOMO into your ads isn’t very hard.

Google has recently come out with a simple countdown timer you can set within your text ads. All you have to do is add this little snippet inside your headline or description:


Then this popup will appear:


This is what the countdown dashboard looks like.

After you set the end date, your ad will include a countdown in real time. Visitors seeing your ads will be motivated by their fear of loss, giving you the edge over your competitors who aren’t using this tactic.

A real-world example

Ad agency Merkle | IMPAQT did this for some of their clients pre-Black Friday to have their Google text ads countdown to when the actual sale started. Here’s what they found:

We used the countdown feature to countdown the days until Thanksgiving and holiday deals began. We discovered the click and impression assisted conversions for this ad copy performed at a significantly higher rate than other copy. We also saw higher conversions associated with this copy on Thanksgiving and for about a week after as a result.

They’re not the only ones to have seen success with this new feature – Clarks America saw a 32% increase in CTR and a 3% increase on conversion rates from using the countdown timers.

Keep your ads current

Now that we’re on the subject of time, have you ever felt that certain things are more relevant or exciting when they just happened?

The concept of being current and timely is pretty intuitive; what happened recently will get more eyeballs and interest than what happened three months ago.

The same is true with your Google ads.

Have you tried testing copy that states how many customers you serviced last month or this year?

I put this to the test for a tax accounting firm. Here were the two ads we pitted against each other:


The control ad (top) and the variation (bottom)

The result? The more timely, current ad saw a whopping 217% increase in CTR and 23% improvement in conversion rates.

And I’m willing to bet that the specificity of the number also added some conversion power…

Want better ad copy? Make sure to check out our video on which Google ad copy mistakes you need to avoid! 

Get super specific

Numbers are easy to digest and understand, and studies show that incorporating them into your copy can make it appear more accurate and credible.

Here’s a great example from MECLABS in which Amy Hebdon created a new numbers-driven ad to compete against her control ad:


The control ad (top) and the variation (bottom)

Which one do you think performed the best?

The control ad did.

Just kidding, the new ad did! It actually received an 88% higher click-through rate at a confidence level of 99%.

Why did this happen? The specificity of the new ad could have made it just a tad more credible than the control ad.

How could we make the ad perform even better?

By getting even more specific.

It’s been shown that specific numbers like 1,542 can improve performance over round numbers like 1,500+. If you’re including a number, write out the exact number!

The more specific you are, the more believable you become.

And the more believable you become, the bigger your chances are of becoming the next David Blaine, or just really good at giving people a pleasant experience.

Make things personal

When it comes to writing ads, do you sometimes fall into the trap of being a little egocentric? Do you use words like “we,” “us,” “me,” “myself” and “I”?

Words like that fail to focus on the customer’s needs and can hurt your chances of getting a click – not to mention they’ve been shown to hurt conversions on landing pages, too.

When it comes to writing copy that resonates, I couldn’t agree more with this nugget from John Kuraoka:

The second-best word is “you.” The best word is the customer’s name.

Since we’re still in the stone age of advertising and can’t add the visitor’s first name to our Google ads automatically, we’ll have to settle for second best.

So how do you craft Google ads that use power words like “you” to enhance ad performance? Take these ads for example:


Which one stands out and gets you most excited to click?

One could argue both Shopify and Volusion do a great job, but we all know that AmeriCommerce struggles.

“Awarded “Best eCommerce Solution”? Ptssshh. Enough about yourself. What can you do for me?!

Find opportunities where you can include the word “you” in your headline or first description line. And as always, lead with benefits.

Make your ads hyper-local

A lot of advertisers target more than just one city when creating their Google Ads campaigns. Many even advertise nationally.

Even if you offer services world-wide, you want to be welcoming to your potential customers and show them that help is right around the corner.

You may already have a 800 number that you use for all your Google Ads call extensions and landing pages, or maybe even a pool of 800 numbers. But did you know that having phone numbers with geographic proximity to the visitor can double your conversion rates?

Yeah, believe it or not, your 800 numbers could be working against you.


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So how can you put this to the test in your Google ads?

By creating geographic-specific Google Ads campaigns and have your ad copy and call extensions specific to that geographic area as well.

The goal here is to let your prospective customers know that you’re right around the corner, with a helping hand.

If you’re still using the regular Google call forwarding in your Google Ads call extensions, stop it immediately. Go to a call tracking provider and start buying all their local phone numbers.


Test your heart out

With so many of your competitors worrying about 1,000 things other than writing better ads, you now have the ammunition to make your Google ads the most glorious ads in the world (read: the best-performing ones).

That is, if you start testing today.

So go!

This post originally appeared on the Unbounce blog.

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Meet The Author

Johnathan Dane

Johnathan Dane is the founder and leading captain of KlientBoost, a creative digital agency specializing in pay-per-click marketing with search and display networks. When he’s not working hard on increasing client success, you can find him playing pick-up basketball at the local gym with the elders.


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